Sleeping Valor

It was eight ‘o’ clock. [I think it's actually "eight o'clock"] Tally sat in her room with the window slightly open. The breeze was rustling the pages of her magazine. ...

Well so much for being helpful. This is beautiful. My wispy limbs reach outward in longing: I hunger. I might replace that colon with a semi colon, since you're not ...

Bye!! Have fun! ^_^

^_^ Great idea.

“What are you doing up?” Charlotte grumbled. She was sipping from a glass of water and there were tears stains down her tanned cheeks. Where is Charlotte in the kitchen? ...

:D Thanks everyone! ^_^ So far I haven't got may presies, but I gave a very sad list. =P On the other hand, I've only opened one card and already ...

:D Thanks guys. =P I'll get to this stuff ASAP (*forces herself to take a break from DoaV*) ^_^ Keek!

Quote: No matter what? I think the question was already posed, but what about self-defense? That's irrelevant, really, because that's why it's called self-defense and not murder. Killing is killing, ...

:birthday: Hee! I'm seventeen! *happy dance* :D Special thanks to Wolf who was the first to notice! Now, what should I do to celebrate? I want to have some kind ...

(They can, but if a person wanted a response to a different username then they'd have to say it) Hmm. Living in a big house you bought with just a ...

But what tells you that? Your gut? Laws? Society? If you're killing a killer, is it still wrong? If you were raised since birth to kill, and knew nothing else, ...

Heya! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see so many new people on this site. ^_^ Australia, huh? What's it like out there? Also, when you write stories, is the ...

2010? That's....2 years away?

You're right Wolf! Dreams are fun, though I have avoided them for fear of being cliche. =P Dream ideas 1) The raid: Yazra finds herself in the middle of a ...

*dies and goes to heaven with a smile when she sees the amazing crits she's got* Hope this critique helped. :D Amazingly helpful. Thanks so much for reading this! XD ...